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Dragongirl
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PostSubject: Middle Master Ginger    Thu Sep 09, 2010 1:52 pm

Name: Ginger
Age in Turns: 74
Appearance: Ginger has Red hair that is in Flipped Style shoulder length and has Blue eyes that are very beautiful. She is a bit taller than most people her age.
Personality: "Ginger would be what is considered motherly. she is very sweet and caring for people and dragons at Cobalt Weyr.
Background: Ginger was quite smart for her age, born to parents of Ista Hold. At the age of 7, she was aloud to breed her first Runner, a beautiful Cremello mare named Miyeko, whose parents were a beautiful Palomino stallion and a Cremello mare.
When Ginger was 12, a flood of injuries came to her hold. She wandered down and tried to help, showing a knack for healing and calming people and dragons.

Once the flood ended, she was offered a chance for apprenticeship. Due to how helpful she had been to the Hold doing the flood. At first she did not want to leave her family, but also did not want to lose what might be her only chance at apprenticeship.

After talking it through with her parents, she decided to accept the offer and become an apprentice. She studied under a master being a very quick learner. She caught on quickly.






At around age 14 she becomes a journeywoman as a jurneywoman she traveled around travel around Pern helping different holds. She met Fenzon and he join Ginger on her travels.

1 turn later, Master-Genecrafter Sevrell dies and Ginger is asked to join the Genehall as the green apprentice (3692) She accepts the offer and studies with the other masters. She was supported and encourage bye Fenzon at this time she realized Fenzon was her soul-mate.


25 turns later, Master Montorez passed, and Ginger, aged 40, becomes middle aprentice (3717). At this time Fenzon and her where an official couple and they had the first child name Clare.


9 Turns later, Master Goexel Passes, and Ginger, 49, becomes senior aprentice (3726)
Around this time Fenzon and Ginger had there second child named Mathew.

18 Turns later, Master Tegara passes, and Ginger, 67, becomes a master (3744)
Also at this time there third and last child was born she was named Sunny.

7 Turns later (now), Master Quindon passes, and Ginger, 74, becomes the middle master (3756) At this time Clare would sometimes appear and help her mother out with stuff and her younger sibling.

Also, the genehall is currently moving the last of its equipment from its old hall near Igen hold to its new hall, near Cobalt Weyr.



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PostSubject: Stuff to Fix   Fri Sep 10, 2010 3:57 am

Dragongirl wrote:
Name: Ginger
Age in Turns: 25
Appearance: Ginger has red hair that was in flipped style and blue eyes. She is a bit taller the the most people her age.
Personality: Ginger would be what you would consider the motherly. She is very sweat a caring for people and Dragons at Cobalt Weyr.
Background: She was born to parents of the Hold Ista Hold. She was very smart for her age.

At the age of 7 she was aloud to bred her first Runner which was a beautiful Cremello Gold Runners called Miyeko. Who parents where a Palomino stallion and Cremello Mare.

When she was 13 there was a flood of injured dragons and rider coming into the hold. She wander down to try to help the other with the flood of injured dragon and rider. Showing a knack for healing and calming people and there dragons.

Once the flood of injures calmed she was offer a chance to apprentice her parents. At first she did not want to leave her family but also did not want to give up what might be her only chance at an apprenticeship. After talking it over with her parents she deiced to accept the off and become an apprentice.

After training at the age of 15 she was promoted to Middle apprentice. After the death of the others masters she was soon the middle Master.

In the Appearance section, it should look like this, "Ginger has Red hair that is in Flipped Style and has Blue eyes. She is a bit taller than most people her age." You should try to elaborate a bit more. (Example: Red hair in Flipped Style that goes down to abotu her shoulders, Brilliant Blue eyes that seem to see right to your soul, Ginger has a small nose, a happy face, round face, etc.)

Personality Section: It should be, "Ginger would be what is considered motherly. she is very sweet and caring for people and dragons at Cobalt Weyr."

Background Section: This should be worded like this, "Ginger was quite smart for her age, born to parents of Ista Hold. At the age of 7, she was aloud to breed her first Runner, a beautiful Cremello mare named Miyeko, whose parents were a beautiful Palomino stallion and a Cremello mare.
When Ginger was 13, a flood of injuries came to her hold. She wandered down and tried to help, showing a knack for healing and calming people and dragons.
Once the flood ended, she was offered a chance for apprenticeship. At first she did not want to leave her family, but also did not want to lose what might be her only chance at apprenticeship. After talking it through with her parents, she decided to accept the offer and become an Genecrafter apprentice.
At the age of 15, after several years of training, she was promoted to middle apprentice. After many more years and the deaths of several more masters, she finally became the Middle Genecrafter Master."

Eveyrhting else looks good. You can always get more pets later, but you'll have to buy them then, so make sure Miyeko is the only pet you want to START with. Remember however you might get an experiment or two.
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PostSubject: Re: Middle Master Ginger    Fri Sep 10, 2010 4:33 am

Okay fixed it.
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PostSubject: Approved   Fri Sep 10, 2010 4:36 am

Okay good job. Approved!
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PostSubject: Re: Middle Master Ginger    Fri Sep 10, 2010 8:41 am

I'm sorry, but i have to un-approve this. It does not explain how she came to actualy be in the genehall, and healers and genecrafters are two diffrent halls.

What I need: An explaination of how she came to be an aprentice at the genehall after being one at the healer hall.

What happened as she moved up the ranks

her premotion to master

her current premotion to middle master

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Weyrwoman Alana and Gold Essaith
WeyrlingMaster P'alo and Ivory Priloth
Rider Gie and Green Irilith
Candidate Master Ri-Ri and Guilded Ebith
Master Genecrafter Delphon
Green Aprentice Genecrafter Darian
Journeywoman Healer Evangeline

Feel free to PM me with Questions relating to the RP, its kinda my job to answer them. lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Middle Master Ginger    Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:23 pm

Background: Ginger was quite smart for her age, born to parents of Ista Hold. At the age of 7, she was aloud to breed her first Runner, a beautiful Cremello mare named Miyeko, whose parents were a beautiful Palomino stallion and a Cremello mare.
When Ginger was 12, a flood of injuries came to her hold. She wandered down and tried to help, showing a knack for healing and calming people and dragons.

Once the flood ended, she was offered a chance for apprenticeship. Due to how helpful she had been to the Hold doing the flood. At first she did not want to leave her family, but also did not want to lose what might be her only chance at apprenticeship.

After talking it through with her parents, she decided to accept the offer and become an apprentice.



At around age 14 she becomes a journeywoman

1 turn later, Master-Genecrafter Sevrell dies and Ginger is asked to join the Genehall as the green aprentice (3692)

25 turns later, Master Montorez passed, and Ginger, aged 40, becomes middle aprentice (3717)

9 Turns later, Master Goexel Passes, and Ginger, 49, becomes senior aprentice (3726)

18 Turns later, Master Tegara passes, and Ginger, 67, becomes a master (3744)

7 Turns later (now), Master Quindon passes, and Ginger, 74, becomes the middle master (3756)

Also, the genehall is currently moving the last of its equipment from its old hall near Igen hold to its new hall, near Cobalt Weyr.

_________________
Weyrwoman Alana and Gold Essaith
WeyrlingMaster P'alo and Ivory Priloth
Rider Gie and Green Irilith
Candidate Master Ri-Ri and Guilded Ebith
Master Genecrafter Delphon
Green Aprentice Genecrafter Darian
Journeywoman Healer Evangeline

Feel free to PM me with Questions relating to the RP, its kinda my job to answer them. lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Middle Master Ginger    Fri Sep 10, 2010 6:11 pm

Re-Approved!

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Weyrwoman Alana and Gold Essaith
WeyrlingMaster P'alo and Ivory Priloth
Rider Gie and Green Irilith
Candidate Master Ri-Ri and Guilded Ebith
Master Genecrafter Delphon
Green Aprentice Genecrafter Darian
Journeywoman Healer Evangeline

Feel free to PM me with Questions relating to the RP, its kinda my job to answer them. lol!
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